bruised bananas in a hospital bed. i was thinking of having a window, but i figured maybe that was too hopeful? what do you guys think?
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i think its better not to include the window. i think if you make th room really dark it will help the concept with on oppressive environment. and i think the oxygen tank is too much, it takes focus away from the bananas.
what about if the oxygen tank was smaller and/or behind the bed? i kind of like it and the cord from it helps bring your eye (well mine atleast) to the bananas. before i added it, it felt like something was missing and there was no main focal point. and yeah darkening the room is a good idea.
Maybe not the most elegant idea, but I would definitely include it in your sketches to an AD.
As far as the details go (oxygen tank, window, etc), I think the main idea works, so it's really up to you.
Sometimes it's great to have variations on the same theme. For example, banana + hospital equipment... maybe also include a simpler, more impactful sketch as well with the same concept.
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